Writing the Narrative Essay: How to Find
the Words
A student from overseas did well on a research
paper for an American college. She said, “Research takes up space, and
the words in the research are correct because the writing is in English.”
Now, however, she has to write a narrative essay in her own words.
She is afraid she does not know enough English.
Such a paper can be hard for anyone. Experts at Purdue University in
Indiana define a narrative essay as “often anecdotal, experiential and
personal.” In other words, this kind of essay usually tells a story from
the writer’s experience. It is about something the writer has lived.
A narrative essay usually provides an insight. For example, such essays
might be named “How I Won the 100-Meter Dash” or “How I Came to Study in
the United States.” It is often written in the first person – the “I”
form. And it offers a chance for creative writing, for expressing
yourself about yourself in the paper.
The Purdue experts say that if your narrative essay is written as a
story, you need to provide an introduction, a plot, a setting, a climax
and a conclusion or ending. Often the narrative essay requires
characters as well. And this essay usually follows events in the order
they happened.
Judith Baumel is a poet and a professor at Adelphi University in New
York.
“Sometimes I ask students to remember an early
moment with their parents and sort of think about where they were
physically. Think about what was in front of them, what was behind them,
what was above them, below them. Just describe it out.”
Professor Baumel describes the exercise as remarkable. Says she learned
it from another writer, graphic novelist Lynda Barry.
Ms. Baumel also has advice for English students who worry about not
using the right words. She says the language has a great vocabulary.
“And that’s a real bonus for students who are just learning English. You
really can play around with the vocabulary pretty early (in the process
of learning the language).”
She says she introduces language learners to the thesaurus, which she
calls “a great resource.” A thesaurus is a kind of dictionary. It can
help you replace a word with a synonym, another word having the same or
similar meaning. Sometimes it also provides antonyms -- words with
opposite or nearly opposite meanings from the word you are replacing.
Judith Baumel notes the example of words that all describe a place to
sit, words like chair and sofa and couch and chaise.
“All of this is available online now. Anybody in the world can just go
online and get an online thesaurus.” |